Business Communication: Effective Writing, Editing, Presentation Feedback

What would you focus on during the editing process to improve the reception of your speech by the intended audience? Metcalfe (2022) gives us specific editing and revision topics. Please reflect that in this answer. How could you go about getting constructive feedback on your presentation? Give us a specific person you would ask, why you selected that person, and write out the language you use like a little script for asking for that feedback. During the presentation, you notice several members of the audience starting to look bored and drifting off to sleep. What could you do to reengage your audience in the presentation?