Critique of the presentation

Critique of the presentation How was the content presented? What was good, what was not so good? How could the presenter make the presentation better?( solve the problem in the end by using negative points) This is my note Plz write presentation critique and answer the follow Qs How was the content presented? What was good, what was not so good? How could the presenter make the presentation better? No more than 2 pages Use academic words .. and write as presentation critique( essay) Positive things 1 Slides design He really used organized slides the background for the slides comfortable to the eyes He did not use many colors so did not disperse the audience 2- Also, font size was easy and suitable to read the slides. 2 The content on the slides did not have to much words because He just mentioned the main point . Used a stick to point Also he had enough information about his content. He had clear voice so we heard when I was on the back. Negative things However, there were some bad things which the presenter did it. Even though the slides were organized by words but he had some slides had too much graphs He most of the time read from the slides , so he loosed eye contact with eduance He sometimes stand back and ignore the audience Does not use video because he talked about how the devise worked