Description of how differing ideologies led to increased cold war tensions
These two statements are responses from my teacher on my submission, so revision just need to be based on this:
- Needs an accurate description of how differing ideologies led to increased cold war tensions. This response clearly addresses events that took place during the arms race, including the Cuban Missile Crisis. However, this information is indirectly related to ideologies. A description of the different ideologies that led to increased Cold War tensions could not be located.
- you provided a logical explanation with insufficient detail, of the effect of cold war tensions on American culture and domestic policies. Executive Order 9835 accurately explains a domestic policy that resulted from the Cold War. The First Red Scare of the 1920s is inaccurately connected to the Cold War. An accurate explanation of the cultural effects of Cold War tensions is not readily apparent.