This came from my committee chair.
We have heard back from the URR and several areas of your proposal need further attention. The URR provided excellent feedback on the checklist which I am attaching. Please read this over and note all areas highlighted in yellow depicting what changes are needed. They provide an excellent road map on the corrections/additions necessary. Look at the checklist first and then make the corrections on the attached proposal highlighting each of those changes in yellow. Then go back to the check list and under each yellow highlight show the page and paragraph from your proposal where the correction(s) can be located. When complete please return your amended proposal and amended checklist to me, via Walden email. Please do not remove any of the URR's comments.
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